tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post318944988971684985..comments2024-03-12T18:52:31.920-04:00Comments on Write with Fey: K - Kissing ScenesChrys Feyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comBlogger51125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-35146450348922444602016-05-20T22:45:13.066-04:002016-05-20T22:45:13.066-04:00I think kissing scenes in YA can be a lot more fun...I think kissing scenes in YA can be a lot more fun, because they can be that awkward first kiss. :p Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-19422669650250608062016-05-20T22:42:18.255-04:002016-05-20T22:42:18.255-04:00I get to write kissing scenes in my YA and they ar...I get to write kissing scenes in my YA and they are fun to write. These are great excerpts. Have a wonderful weekend. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-11357933312439390832016-05-20T13:33:38.081-04:002016-05-20T13:33:38.081-04:00Thank you, Claudine! :)Thank you, Claudine! :)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-37451789486717888522016-05-20T13:25:50.437-04:002016-05-20T13:25:50.437-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-45465631616435195392016-05-20T04:22:38.272-04:002016-05-20T04:22:38.272-04:00Lol, I used to read romance novels in my teens, no...Lol, I used to read romance novels in my teens, now not really. But these you've shared are great, Chrys! I like the first one. :)Yanting Guehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04788603550626277974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-1487635109954473762016-05-20T04:02:43.057-04:002016-05-20T04:02:43.057-04:00Wow! Hot and brilliant! Awesome writeup Chrys. Wow! Hot and brilliant! Awesome writeup Chrys. Romance Reader https://www.blogger.com/profile/10633164931292182035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-38145284846304524982016-05-19T16:34:04.014-04:002016-05-19T16:34:04.014-04:00There certainly is a lot of dating and kissing in ...There certainly is a lot of dating and kissing in high school. But, yes, reigning it in for YA is a good idea. Not forcing an intimate scene is hard. Finding some way to make it flow natural is important.Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-78623625089961097172016-05-19T16:32:32.768-04:002016-05-19T16:32:32.768-04:00Thank you, Hilary.Thank you, Hilary.Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-65453885071879473502016-05-19T16:32:15.387-04:002016-05-19T16:32:15.387-04:00LOL! Thank you. ;) I wanted to make that scene dif...LOL! Thank you. ;) I wanted to make that scene different...well I wanted to make all of the romance scenes in Seismic Crimes different.Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-49260268393376563062016-05-19T16:31:29.510-04:002016-05-19T16:31:29.510-04:00Nope, No kissing scenes in kids books, unless it&#...Nope, No kissing scenes in kids books, unless it's a kiss from mom. :)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-6870030739795107252016-05-19T15:33:32.762-04:002016-05-19T15:33:32.762-04:00Phew, hot stuff! Well done, Chrys. I love the use ...Phew, hot stuff! Well done, Chrys. I love the use of food in the second scene from Seismic Crimes. Very HAWT ;) Lisa Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05310475781785711620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-18401007998029077332016-05-19T12:18:00.760-04:002016-05-19T12:18:00.760-04:00Hi Chrys - brilliantly written ... well done ... I...Hi Chrys - brilliantly written ... well done ... I'm going back to my biographies, reference books etc now! Cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-38386441220930054592016-05-19T12:17:19.509-04:002016-05-19T12:17:19.509-04:00Those are great scenes. It's information much ...Those are great scenes. It's information much needed in my department because though I don't fancy romance novels. I do try to incorporate a bit of romance in to my YA stories. What are High School kids if they are not dating and kissing and such. Generally though, I try to reign it is as much as possible and still try to convey the intimacy.<br />I have to admit, I have never liked any kissing scene I have written for. It always seems forced and not intimate at all.Jeffrey Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973104877310669196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-53288994894624132652016-05-19T12:12:28.312-04:002016-05-19T12:12:28.312-04:00I bet writing kissing scenes can be challenging. N...I bet writing kissing scenes can be challenging. Not sure I could do that. Fortunately, I write children's books, so I don't have to deal with it. Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844837212122243321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-71175112202748032082016-05-19T11:35:09.382-04:002016-05-19T11:35:09.382-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-45361647450101321852016-05-19T11:35:01.366-04:002016-05-19T11:35:01.366-04:00They are. ;)They are. ;)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-4822485634835614842016-05-19T11:34:52.192-04:002016-05-19T11:34:52.192-04:00Thank you, Denise. :)Thank you, Denise. :)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-18919220822336554932016-05-19T11:34:39.589-04:002016-05-19T11:34:39.589-04:00Hahaha! I'm laughing tears.Hahaha! I'm laughing tears.Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-17277038128652194772016-05-19T10:53:28.250-04:002016-05-19T10:53:28.250-04:00Very nice. :-)
sherry @ fundinmentalVery nice. :-)<br />sherry @ <a href="http://www.fundinmental.com/" rel="nofollow"> fundinmental</a> sherry fundinhttp://www.fundinmental.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-19029063246072901182016-05-19T05:31:20.702-04:002016-05-19T05:31:20.702-04:00Kissing scenes are so much fun to write. ^_^Kissing scenes are so much fun to write. ^_^Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-51941024355733630042016-05-19T01:27:53.102-04:002016-05-19T01:27:53.102-04:00Done well, kissing scenes can add so much to a boo...Done well, kissing scenes can add so much to a book and to the reader's concept of the characters. I enjoyed the romance in your books! Great post and great examples.Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-73703979350157352982016-05-18T22:06:42.742-04:002016-05-18T22:06:42.742-04:00I'm sorry...I can't write more...I have to...I'm sorry...I can't write more...I have to find my husband and attack himBirgithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09439720285857050428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-5254390339901051492016-05-18T21:49:45.022-04:002016-05-18T21:49:45.022-04:00Awesome. I like that I got someone who doesn't...Awesome. I like that I got someone who doesn't like reading romance to say that. :D Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-86592283624910079762016-05-18T21:08:02.076-04:002016-05-18T21:08:02.076-04:00I am not much into reading romance, but those were...I am not much into reading romance, but those were hot scenes!sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-20274953371184556292016-05-18T16:28:54.000-04:002016-05-18T16:28:54.000-04:00Well then there is a bit of a romantic bone in you...Well then there is a bit of a romantic bone in you. ;)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.com