tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post164182674474510152..comments2024-03-12T18:52:31.920-04:00Comments on Write with Fey: A Little Murder (Flash Fiction)Chrys Feyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-79348767717518608072017-01-27T08:38:24.191-05:002017-01-27T08:38:24.191-05:00I really enjoyed reading your short story fiction....I really enjoyed reading your short story fiction. It is a <a href="http://www.customwritingie.com/faq/" rel="nofollow">creative writing ireland</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00206748779203112133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-35547356955199049662015-08-15T11:12:33.694-04:002015-08-15T11:12:33.694-04:00Thank you! At first I thought she was 16 but for s...Thank you! At first I thought she was 16 but for some reason she wanted to be younger. I feel terrible for her too. Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-18423156158648339452015-08-14T23:54:49.191-04:002015-08-14T23:54:49.191-04:00OK that was riveting! I was thinking she was 11 or...OK that was riveting! I was thinking she was 11 or 12. This is frightening and this little girl has a rough start to life. I feel bad for her character because it sounds like real life.Birgithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09439720285857050428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-19157370079308008872015-08-13T19:02:17.808-04:002015-08-13T19:02:17.808-04:00I agree. They shouldn't.I agree. They shouldn't. Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-58520407654080852015-08-13T19:01:42.010-04:002015-08-13T19:01:42.010-04:00Thank you so much, Melissa! When I first started w...Thank you so much, Melissa! When I first started writing, I never thought I could write flash fiction or short stories but now it's all I seem to write. Thanks for the wonderful compliments! :DChrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-10202166394287868142015-08-13T19:00:44.992-04:002015-08-13T19:00:44.992-04:00Thanks!
No, I haven't heard from Gina lately....Thanks!<br /><br />No, I haven't heard from Gina lately. I emailed her before 4th of July and haven't received a reply back. I know that she went on a vacation recently. I'm not sure if she's back yet, but I think she might be. I know I saw a post saying she had good news, so I'm waiting for an update on that.Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-73795212291432633882015-08-13T17:48:34.780-04:002015-08-13T17:48:34.780-04:00Intense and exciting and disturbing (children shou...Intense and exciting and disturbing (children shouldn't have to witness such things even though they do, too often). sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-47778571786546324422015-08-13T17:37:38.730-04:002015-08-13T17:37:38.730-04:00What a gripping piece of flash fiction. I envy wri...What a gripping piece of flash fiction. I envy writers who can write FF. I can't do it. It takes real talent to pull readers into such a short story . So much suspense with brevity , I admire you . I loved this piece . You hooked me with the opening and kept my attention , curiosity and apprehension all the way through the very last line. I loved the last line, BTW. I, too, was wondering how old Charm was. You ended a suspenseful piece with an excellent knock out punch. Loved it.Melissa Sugarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16268333458796847721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-52170498151661234052015-08-13T17:31:13.871-04:002015-08-13T17:31:13.871-04:00Yikes. Great flash. Great giveaway.
Have you heard...Yikes. Great flash. Great giveaway.<br />Have you heard from Gina lately?Sandra Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03814573408898140885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-57894644832378186202015-08-13T16:16:14.903-04:002015-08-13T16:16:14.903-04:00I know. Even though I wrote it...it is awful. I know. Even though I wrote it...it is awful. Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-17234070080562576882015-08-13T13:08:50.306-04:002015-08-13T13:08:50.306-04:00Wow! What a thing for a six-year-old to go through...Wow! What a thing for a six-year-old to go through!Sherry Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844837212122243321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-60945236987848506142015-08-13T11:19:23.690-04:002015-08-13T11:19:23.690-04:00I didn't think so, but it was the perfect way ...I didn't think so, but it was the perfect way to reveal her age. ;)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-75084237659133561802015-08-13T11:19:03.556-04:002015-08-13T11:19:03.556-04:00Thanks, Lux! :)Thanks, Lux! :)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-28214184630897647752015-08-13T11:18:48.526-04:002015-08-13T11:18:48.526-04:00Thank you, Cherdo! :)Thank you, Cherdo! :)Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-51160803244236384972015-08-13T11:18:33.599-04:002015-08-13T11:18:33.599-04:00I totally agree.I totally agree.Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-74121155678694818292015-08-13T11:17:52.472-04:002015-08-13T11:17:52.472-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-6715655349869487282015-08-13T11:17:35.865-04:002015-08-13T11:17:35.865-04:00Awesome! :DAwesome! :DChrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-40060677469948112452015-08-13T08:27:27.704-04:002015-08-13T08:27:27.704-04:00Poor kid - and no, I don't think she'd be ...Poor kid - and no, I don't think she'd be convicted.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-51140804084345949672015-08-13T06:26:28.175-04:002015-08-13T06:26:28.175-04:00Bravo, Chrys! That was powerful. Wow.Bravo, Chrys! That was powerful. Wow.Lux G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00557863683608790087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-11544272537292956592015-08-12T22:34:40.774-04:002015-08-12T22:34:40.774-04:00Whew! I was worried she wouldn't escape.
Well...Whew! I was worried she wouldn't escape.<br /><br />Well written, Chrys!Cherdohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00264612202714933480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-35939894653556365072015-08-12T20:48:45.066-04:002015-08-12T20:48:45.066-04:00That was really intense. He got what he deserved. ...That was really intense. He got what he deserved. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-78309634566427859792015-08-12T20:07:51.292-04:002015-08-12T20:07:51.292-04:00Loved that ending!Loved that ending!Mary Kirklandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04991095291522043588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-45011087103719355322015-08-12T17:57:05.264-04:002015-08-12T17:57:05.264-04:00Great reveal of her age at the end, Chrys! You tot...Great reveal of her age at the end, Chrys! You totally had me thinking she was much older. Liz Blockerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16160510626027597666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-18037452553179582252015-08-12T16:40:35.266-04:002015-08-12T16:40:35.266-04:00Thank you! I was hoping someone would mention the ...Thank you! I was hoping someone would mention the T-Rex reference. :DChrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9133489888936435050.post-91239851502408752292015-08-12T16:40:04.972-04:002015-08-12T16:40:04.972-04:00Thanks, Roland!Thanks, Roland!Chrys Feyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11955009490266358041noreply@blogger.com